The track needs more production. The artist needs more work on delivery. It did not do anything to set him apart from the other dudes out there that say they are rap artist too. I hear this type of stuff all day with artist submissions for the magazine. What would make me WANT to do a story on this artist? The lyrics don’t really talk about anything.

Don’t take it personal… Just hope I can help you get better.

Peace and Blessings,

AK, Publisher/ entertainmentINDUSTRY Magazine